Wednesday, April 6, 2005

Eclipse: A Haiku Sequence Comments

Rating: 4.5

Imperceptible
at first, sunlight changing; then
dusky, or faded,
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Richard George
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Nabakishore Dash 17 August 2022

Full description of eclipse with great imagery.Congrats dear poet George.

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Nade December 07 March 2017

half moon sun on leaves jangles- what a lovely description! :)

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Rajnish Manga 07 October 2015

This Haiku sequence paints a wonderful collage on the canvas of nature. A real treat to the reader. Thanks.

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Babatunde Aremu 07 October 2015

A good way of appreciating nature! Bravo

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2015

To morning of mornings; with the muse of nature. Nice work.

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

A very nice collection of haiku!

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Solitary Man 06 April 2005

an adroit effort, no sharp edges, and no soft soap.

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Clark Keeler 06 April 2005

Unbelievable! ! Great imagery, smooth read, i loved it. I can honestly say that I am jealous.

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Richard George

Richard George

Cheltenham, U.K.
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