Thursday, October 5, 2017

Eclipse Comments

Rating: 5.0

A special event not often seen,
You might say rather rare
‘Tis where the moon wanders away
And sets itself right there
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Rajnish Manga 05 October 2017

The moon travels all on its own, But man's eclipse is coaxed to leave Through penitence and loving....//.... Nice philosophical presentation in the backdrop of solar eclipse. Thanks.

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Christopher Aaron 04 October 2018

Thanks for your reading and evaluation. Kudos to you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2017

A special event not often seen, but you have amazingly expressed here. The moon travels all on its own, It needs no force or shoving but man's eclipse is coaxed to leave. Very wisely perceived and nicely penned poem is shared here. This is brilliant.10

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Christopher Aaron 04 October 2018

Thanks for reading and your comments. C.A.

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