Saturday, July 14, 2012

Eclipse Comments

Rating: 4.9

Whilst gazing up towards the sky
I saw a wondrous sight
For in the beauteous heavens above
The day turned into night
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Valerie Dohren
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Mark Dillon 28 July 2012

Supernova, lovey description and verse.

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Hans Vr 20 July 2012

A masterpiece, Valerie. Superb.

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Joseph Anderson 18 July 2012

If you have not, please submit your poetry for publication. It is certainly worthy. I believe it would sell, very well

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eloida Capuno 16 July 2012

lovely! nice flow of words and imagery.

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Captain Cur 16 July 2012

Awesome, poem of the century, I'm not talking 16th here. Although this is the type of poem that will survive through the centuries. Great, great write!

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Neela Nath Das 15 July 2012

I'm just speechless and spellbound.The cosmic dance of words is hypnotic.

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John Scully 15 July 2012

Beautiful words, especially the line, 'The moon was dancing with the sun'. Great poem.

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Eric Cockrell 14 July 2012

you write the most beautiful poems!

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Heather Wilson 14 July 2012

A really beautiful description of an eclipse Val, so well written, a pleasure to read.

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