Thursday, July 1, 2010

Eclipse Comments

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They caused the eclipse of my regal love,
Dashing my spirit and corporal strength,
Mutilating my extremities completely;
I really could have gone to any length.
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Ayaz Warith
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 July 2010

========================== ‘For no trade exists in love’ ~ This the one place where Globalization has not brought out claws and jaws…else everywhere are but prey of ‘Eclipse’…indeed a great poem with much poetic punch [pp] to stir grey cells who believe in L :) O :) V :) E :) …. thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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