Echoing Words Comments

Multitudes of emotions emitted in a fraction of a second: Shivers and shudders electrified our beings An emotion packed moment when a woman comes to realize that the seed of her love has sprouted inside in flesh and blood! This moment becomes extremely jubilant when the announcement comes from the man responsible for it! Here the poem conveys the intensity of a multitude of feelings that dashed across the mind! Beautiful diction and powerful presentation!

A wide smile upon my face! Taking a mile with the muse of life. Nice work.