Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Echoing Weeps Comments

Rating: 4.8

Eyes close,
in an embrace of forever,
Never do they long to part,
but forever remain together.
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Crimson Love
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Bella Hernandez 08 December 2011

In death most beleive everything will go away, mainly it does but what is left behind brings more pain and disaters to everyone else that lives. love and tears from faimly and friends. and regret of what could have been Wonderful write. wonderfully outstanding like always! ~Bella

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Scotty Dogg 07 December 2011

Crimson, this is one of my favorites. Great images here. Somehow you made the word 'weep' into a noun. Fantastic poem girl. You go with yo' bad self. Scott.

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Dave Walker 07 December 2011

Another very powerful poem, a fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Drug Fueled.

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