Echoes Of The Past Comments

each footstep follows another dull heartbeat into echoes of the past. could have enchained the retreating feet could have pierced into threshold the steely guilt of having loved once so deeply so dearly

What exquisite images. Naked feet and sun kisses but fail to warm my soul. A wistful creative piece of writing Viola. Karin Anderson

Powerful and emotional and very good

In time the sun will reach the soul and in turn will feed that lovely heart of yours 10 Chris

A sad first line sets the scene with potent imagery - Viola this piece really touches the heart - - hoping time will not only 'flood memory's walls' with dark but will bring back light times too....... Big hig and big 10 from Fay....xx

This makes a beautiful read Viola...so many images come to mind...10++

Poignant and sad, but well penned, especially first line. Liked it. Jim