For Koketso Marishane
they knock my heart to numbness,
echoes so cold and so inevitably strong.
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Well constructed piece. Nonetheless, you're hurting me. I didn't know what I was indirectly doing to you so you'll forgive me for the suspension. From now on, I'll see to it that I touch you before rest. I liked your poem though. It's beautifully constructed regardless of you mentioning my name. Well done.
fine...eloquent...compact composition......10+