Saturday, July 12, 2014

Echoes Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The train left the station, picking up pace,
As I stood on the hill, with the Sun on my face,
A familiar sight, that I saw every day,
In the place I grew up, just across the way.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 March 2022

Excellent poem dear poetess! Loved it.5 stars.

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Jayne Davies 23 November 2014

Thank you Roseann x So glad you like it!

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Roseann Shawiak 21 November 2014

I thoroughly enjoyed this rhythmic, flowing poem and it's past imagery telling your story of youth. Very well written, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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