Sunday, June 21, 2009

Echoes Of Agony Comments

Rating: 4.4

Sounds no one heard but me,
shriek of woes excruciating survival,
the heads recoil sipping juice of no residue,
tentacles move invisibly possessing even every grains left,
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Susan T. Aparejo
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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2009

remarkable! chosen words are fine! 10+

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Mary Joy Lumanog 01 July 2009

This poem is a great...survival of the fittest..just to live..atleast we did survive..despite in times of agony and grief.

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

In this advancing society one has to fullfill all living requirements of oneself and in situations like that it is indeed a self agony that keeps on excruciating with the difficulties.....Very well organized the thoughts and written them in wonder pattern...........10/10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 22 June 2009

TEN POINT S TO FOR ME OR EVEN MORE PA

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Rommel Mark Marchan 22 June 2009

GRABE KA AS I WAS READING THIS POEM IT SEEMS A NOSTALGIC MEMORIES WITH MY MAMA EVERYTIME I ASK HER ALLOWANCE LAGI DELAYED TEACHERS SALARY, N ALOAN PA SA COOP, ADTO PA CAGAYAN, GRABE, YOU KNOW THAT WAS AN AGONIZING EXPERIENCE THAT I NEGLECTED TO BE A TEACHER THOUGH I BELIEVE DEEPLY THAT IS MY NOBLE CALLING. NOW I KNOW A GIFT OF BEING A TEACHER IS NOBLE, A SACRIFICE, NEED NOT TO BE NEGLECTED IN LIEU FOR A VANISHING MATERIAL WEALTH. SANA MAG KA KILALA KAYO MAMA KO SHE IS APPLYING FOR PRINCIPAL 2

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Susan T. Aparejo

Susan T. Aparejo

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