Echoes Of A Silent Life Comments

Personal struggles.. so many questions.. if we listen long enough silence seems to scream.. I enjoyed the way you penned this.. allowing the reader to wander through their own assumptions.. Wendy

good theme and thought sequence. more emotions could have been added perhaps. Good attempt anyway! dr john celes

Pablo, its our own thoughts that cause distress, our unhappiness you have illustrated this well. Why is a very good question. A thoughtful and worthwhile poem. Bob

Great piece of wrting with amazing flow of thought. Excellent composition Pablo. It was a treat.10

very heavy poem dear with lots of depth nevertheless ive heard those 'echoes' it was wonderful anjali

Some people plod those paths, of the quiet silent times.

It is a deep one... very, only upon contemplation of it i sit really understood... i like it..