Friday, October 9, 2020

Echoes Of A Mirage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little splashing waves at the warm sea scented beach,
reflected moonlight large and low to seeming reach.
We were young, in love and trusted that destiny,
hearts so full of dreams and ideal ecstasy.
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Robert Rittel
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2021

A marvelous poem with great philosophic depth with romantic vibes. More importantly, this poem is lyrically blended with great rhythms and rhymes. Top score!

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Soran M. H 09 October 2020

It is a kind of philosophy and knowledge at the same time, here we feel the poet’s deep experience in the realm of writing and life.. really it is Echoes Of A Mirage

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Soran M. H 09 October 2020

Strong and beautiful spiritual poetry that reveals something of the hidden aspect of life. Its poetic images are renewed and attractive, its language is poetic and coherent, the theme is very important and the choice of successful words comes in their place, deserves 5 stars, this is what we are looking for in poetry

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 October 2020

Good poem neighbour. The rhyming is superb. Great stuff.

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