Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Echoes No.8: Our Opened Hearts Comments

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Today is just an ordinary Tuesday,
in Fall, partly bright and partly dark.
The wind rips leaves from their branches
before their time to fall, and they paint
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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

A wonderful poem, I too get lost in music, It's a time when I can get all thoughts and worries out of my head, even if it is only for a short time.

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Bharati Nayak 27 October 2018

Everywhere you go the island is alive and responds to your presence. It is a mysterious union, you are both witness and participant. Person and place, Baharak and island are a single reality. - - - - - - Two landscapes- - two persons - -and two moods- - -Your poem addresses the interconnectivity - - A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
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