Echoes No.7: The Island Poem by Daniel Brick

Echoes No.7: The Island

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The Island you desire
is neither near nor far.
It is both accessible and
completely out of reach.
If you try to get there
by air, the seasoned pilot
will fly in wider and wider
circles, searching for this
green spot in a blue immensity.
He will readily admit failure
and ruefully smile when you
ask for a second attempt...
On a destined morning, you will
sense a different light has covered
your sleep, you will smell sweetness
of an alien fruit, and you will know
you have attained the Island you desire.
Don't think of this poem as a riddle,
don't think of your journey as a miracle,
don't think at all. This is a place you
are meant to be. Your future good deeds
depend on your timely arrival. Even events
leading up to your marriage are intertwined
with your experiences here and now. You may
even cross paths with one of your future
children. She will recognize you immediately:
"Mother, mother, I see you, and now my life
can really begin." And you two will shed tears
of absolute joy in a timeless embrace. And then
a moment later, you will be in Tehran, sitting
in your favorite chair, your mother in the kitchen
fixing your favorite food. And all of this will be
remembered as a dream, or dreamed as a memory.

(This poem was inspired by an email from Baharak as she visited
an island in the Persian Gulf for the first time.)

Monday, October 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2018

My life can really begin! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dawn Novus 22 October 2018

Ain't that just the way that life goes down, up, round...moving way too fast or much too slow... Daniel...you always get to the point of the circle...its in the echo of sound that truth is found and resounds.

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Daniel Brick 23 October 2018

Wonderful comment, Dawn! I appreciate how you don't just read a poem, but live through the experience of it. That shows the poetic spirit within you. Octavio Paz said the purpose of poetry - reading and writing it - is to turn people into living poems! !

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Douglas Scotney 22 October 2018

lines got bigger and bigger then suddenly stopped, like Ravel's Bolero.

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Daniel Brick 23 October 2018

Wow! Douglas, that's a startling comment on the impact of my poem. I admit the poem went in a direction I had not planned in the first draft. But I believe the art of writing a poem involves an intelligence other than my own. (BTW I too like that collapse at the end of BOLERO.)

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