Sunday, November 11, 2018

Echoes No.11: Inspired By Attar Comments

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Your eyes watch bright winds sweep away
the day's debris, or they watch as sun rays
sparkle the lake's surface. It doesn't matter
which happens first. The order of time is suspended,
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Daniel Brick
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Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2018

A very moving poem. Extremely well penned. A loving tribute to Attar.

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George Krokos 11 November 2018

Attar was a very gifted Sufi poet and also a God realised being. Well written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2018

Bright wind sweeps away but your eyes watch the beauty of sparkle.Unworthy doubts provoke thought. Having joyful mind is definitely very interesting. This poem is very brilliantly and interestingly penned.10

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