Echoes No.11: Inspired By Attar Poem by Daniel Brick

Echoes No.11: Inspired By Attar

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Your eyes watch bright winds sweep away
the day's debris, or they watch as sun rays
sparkle the lake's surface. It doesn't matter
which happens first. The order of time is suspended,
so that everything can be fulfilled at once...
It is the same experience when you take things
of the world into your Interior Being:
They are cleansed and returned to the world.
Every problem can be resolved through your
heart's generosity. Attar watches over you,
his love for you will last for centuries...
Forgive me! I had doubts, unworthy doubts,
and did not trust you until this very moment
of shining obedience. I am kneeling at your
left side. It feels good to pay homage with you.

(This poem is a response to Baharak's gift of a poem by Attar, Poet of Nishapur. About himself, Attar wrote,
Attar, you've scattered with each breath
musk-scented mysteries on earth.
* * * *
You've thrilled and excited lovers.
You've strummed your music in the key of love.)

Sunday, November 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: praise,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2018

A very moving poem. Extremely well penned. A loving tribute to Attar.

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George Krokos 11 November 2018

Attar was a very gifted Sufi poet and also a God realised being. Well written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2018

Bright wind sweeps away but your eyes watch the beauty of sparkle.Unworthy doubts provoke thought. Having joyful mind is definitely very interesting. This poem is very brilliantly and interestingly penned.10

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