Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Echoes Comments

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I remember when his love died,
With care, I buried each memory,
How could I know echoes would escape,
Bringing to my heart their treachery
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Lora Colon
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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Echoes keep me chained to his memory, reverberated through my mind as I read this poem. Was thinking if they were echoes of his loss they would be consoling even though with tears. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2015

favorites: When the evening spreads its purple cloak I run underneath, trying to hide.............................watch out for spiders! ! and: His words crash and break like crystal waves, Pounding my heart's shore endlessly.................i think you are FAR from mad, but some of those long, stone piers for stopping waves might come in heart-handy. :) bri

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Jak Black 09 December 2015

A well written piece Lora. Nothing worse than putting your heart and soul into a relationship only to be spurned. Committing your life to another can be such a big gamble, maybe more so these days.

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Ashek Sarker 08 December 2015

wonderful poem.thank u for sharing

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Lora Colon

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