Echoes Comments

A really beautiful dedication Hazel.....it contains all the grief of loss but also the appreciation of life and friendship.......all of which make us better people. I read this a few times.....very moving piece indeed! 10.

Leaving behind sweet memories the friends may go but the friendship is immortal, its colors and aroma appears through out our lives in all our good deeds, may be a beautiful poetry like this or in any other flower that spring through our loving clay...............10

I always think and hope not only me as Ramesh Rai commented..I am agree...but yet to know..Why? ..may soul rest in peace

Good people are always loved by God that so their life is short on this earth. May their soul rest in heavenly abode. A tribute from a sincere and bossom friend can never b denied.

Lovely tribute to the friends, whose memories are alive in you...Beautiful poem.. Loved reading it.

friendship will last forever if only in memories. a great tribute to your friends.

True friendship never dies, come what may? It's invincible and we've the proof in here. You get 10 on 10 for this.

The poem really flows along at a constant fast velocity, rather like time I suppose. It's so tragic but what a great tribute!

This is fast and racy, you have capyured exactly what you wanted to.

The death moves sideways during our existence, and I always wonder if I would be ready. I felt connected with your piece because I wrote something similar in my poem meet the dead. I loved the images that you used: oak tree - green isle - desert sand. thank you.

I don't know what can i say It's pretty, Hazel I love it The one of my favourite

very beautifully written, , , ,

A very deep thought worked on your mind while you wrote this. Magnificent.

Life is a thief of happiness, peace and love, ............ Very nice.... O life! Races at different paces, ......... I will take this line as people moving towards the end of life. Anyone can be the winner. No guarantee. Soaked in the sweet scent of forget-me not's, .... Brilliant Hazel. And then the splendid rhythm of the last part of your poem. I loved the words and Alliteration in the poem. A sad poem sending great message to your friends. Yes Hazel care for you, she remembers you and she misses you. Wonderful

Madam, I'm speechless. Don't have any words to express...Just beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this great piece.

Greta tribute to the passed ones. R.I.P. may they rest in peace and the same blessings may god shower upon you.............great work! obair iontach!

Ah hazel Don't make me cry..... Your mournful cries jolt the sky One of the finest elegy of present time Decorated with splendid diction, images and similies As what the great john Milton with lycidos and Shelley on keats, with such refine skill you mournfully portrayed two of your lost friend May their soul be in crest....... A poignant cnotsrst of life and death As once we had in Adonis myth Sweet as biblical hymns Stirred our soul and mind Graciously treated the theme That Making the broken hearts serene The time you all three had in past Was rosy and auspicious And stronger than any sun or frost Pray in heaven they would bless with gracious.......

RIP loved the emotional balance... Good work and numb temperate sensed...

What a beautiful poem Hazel, a wonderful tribute to your dear friends who you obviously loved very much. Excellent work - a definite 10.

awesome.... indulge and intense... i really liked it...the imagery is nicely crafted and well written.