Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Echocardiogram Comments

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Someone is eavesdropping on my heart.
Wires taped to my chest
reveal ocean sounds swishing
rhythmically and without ceasing.
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Raynette Eitel
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Lamont Palmer 05 February 2011

A poem that reminds of of life's fragility (and our futile desire to conquer it) in a conversational but powerful way. The first line is a brilliant set-up. -LP

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