Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Echo Of My Heart Comments

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Each and every night we would
meet at the lighthouse of love

We would hold each other till
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Bonnie Collins
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Ana Zaldivar 08 February 2009

oh Bonnie this is fabulous! i love it! as always it brings me so much peace, reading your poems.... lovely bonnie. love always, Ana Lia

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I was just reading your poem 'Echo of my Heart' and it is truly beautiful. The cliff edge and the lighthouse of love evoke a dramatic mood. I loved it. I wondered if you would like to read a couple of my poems the first using echo called 'Fading Echo' about my son when a teenager who like most teenagers was very distant at that time. Also my poem 'Fountain of Grief' as that is the loss of someone also as you went through. I would love to share them with you and see what you think. Thanks and God Bless Karin Anderson

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Robert Sheridan 21 September 2008

Bonnie, This poem is a wonderment - fabulous writing here... just a gorgeous atmosphere you have created. The lines are like platinum... loved it! Best to you always, Robert

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Ameer Mcarthur 16 September 2008

The echo of your heart has deafened my ears!

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Rebekah Gamble 01 July 2008

This poem is astounding. It seems like there is only half a metaphor in the knowledge of walking away from one another, the presence of that lonely parting, and yet that only leaves the poem more open and more human.

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Michael Fischer 30 June 2008

Very nicely written...enjoyed it very much! -Michael

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Andrew Blakemore 25 June 2008

A very beautiful poem Bonnie, lovely descriptive qualities. Love, Andrew x

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The mellifluously smoothe flow of this poem, is virtually tranquilizing....Beautiful mastery of ambiance employment....as your select choice of vernacular, places the reader in that lighthouse...in your echo....and within its aural dance.Excellent Work, lass! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Fahim Sayed 18 June 2008

nice write....indeed memories remain as echo in heart. Fahim

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