my mind is plagued
by the stupid things
long ago that used
to make me smile
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coolzies poem. i like your style. i dont do much rhyming either. it seems we have some similarites..just read your bio. i also like to write, sing, and play the piano. if you ever have a free moment you can read some of my poems..rate and comment if you have time..just something to think about, (ah who am i kidding. please, please read and comment on my poems i am really desperate for constructive critisism! ! ! ! ! !)
I tell ya kim you have a unique way of twisting words. Your poems seem to all be free verse mantra poems. A mantra poem is a type of writing that focuses on the same stanza or phrase. All in all, good poem