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The rainbows faded

and stars lit the moonless sky
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Varna Soyokaze
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Susan Williams 18 October 2020

We know one day we die. We foresaw the coming severance; - - -> again your vocabulary is very original - - this poem gets top marks

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Susan Williams 18 October 2020

very nice- - > like your original use of words- - > We started together as one from being a monochrome; / But today I end it alone./ Its time I fly back home- - - the rhymes in this are very natural and organic

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Soyokaze 16 July 2021

A . Thank you Susan for your kind words...

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