Wednesday, March 12, 2008

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Love’s gravity works in reverse
so my heart is free now.
Time dilated
to a lovers pace.
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shel cope
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Simone Inez Harriman 25 March 2008

How elated the soul when ready to love again. Thank you Shel.

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Alison Cassidy 24 March 2008

This is beautiful Shel. An exceptionally well written and original expression of a timeless subject. I am impressed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Priyanka Shetty 22 March 2008

thanks for sharing.... it's an awesome poem..

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Lynda Robson 20 March 2008

I can but echo what other people have said, a very profound piece, I enjoyed reading it,10 Lynda x

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Tsira Goge 13 March 2008

shel, You write perfectly well, Likely good feeling...Tsira

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Original Unknown Girl 12 March 2008

Brilliant crafting Shel, the first two lines have caught me, got me in a quandary! Does your heart feel free when the pull is gone? Or did I read you wrong? Whichever, it's very good. HG: -) xx

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