Sunday, October 23, 2005

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Her name was Joan and as he kissed her
in the all but empty room, he recalled-
yes, quite remembered now, a thrilling moment years ago.
Joan the First had, at twelve, in a clumsy, kidding way
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Glenn Bagshaw
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Seán O' Muiriosa 23 October 2005

Wow Glenn, another impressive one. I'm not sure if I'm more impressed by the poem itself or the fact that you didn't use rhyme! But no really, good job. You evoke the desperateness of the situation perfectly.

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