Eccentric Comments

there's no difference between the higher states of meditation and sexual ecstacy...

a strong message universal in tone....

This is a lovely observation - as always from you, dear Onelia - and I fully understand the Eccentric's point of view. Not only men have these perceptions of beauty in a loved one's body and I relate to this so easily!

Wow, Loved it... So enchanting and simply beautiful... :)

Wow it is a wonderful poem Onelia. Amazingly beautiful. 10+++ for it.

Dear Onelia Avelar, continuing to read your poems I discover new values in your poems. The Eccentric is a sample of a little dream for the man-in-the-street, who knows how to travel, at no expense (responds to my poems: The small hero, and the driver of Bronx) . So well planned, well-penned a poem. I give it a 10. Thanks Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

A special technical effect I find in this... well blended and really Onelia only you can do this so effectively.. Eccentric universally... great write and enjoyed. Rema

St Thomas says the Kingdom of Heaven is Within...or maybe as close as someones chin...Coach

Intersting imagery.........

A superb portrait - the closing lines are pure magic creating such a sensual image. justine

This is divine, that last line is a belter! I absolutely love it. Says it all.... HG: -) xx

are you describing me in this one ;)

Guess I am eccentric then...can only agree with the last line again and again and again and... love Donall Donall

eclectically as sensous intensity when flows by the feeling eccentric as the ripples by the living organic, .....................still beautyful verse by the common feeling. well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Just read again. Lasting power. Effortlessly sensual. F

Isn't 'curve' a sensual word? This is wonderfully composed, One. Love it. F