Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Eccentric Comments

Rating: 3.1

He has never been to Jerusalem,
nor Mecca, never visited Tibet,
Bodh Gaya, Fatima or Saragossa,
neither seen the Pope in Rome,
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ONElia AVElar
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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

there's no difference between the higher states of meditation and sexual ecstacy...

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Chitra - 08 February 2009

a strong message universal in tone....

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Janice Windle 03 December 2008

This is a lovely observation - as always from you, dear Onelia - and I fully understand the Eccentric's point of view. Not only men have these perceptions of beauty in a loved one's body and I relate to this so easily!

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Dr Kamran Haider 12 October 2008

Wow, Loved it... So enchanting and simply beautiful... :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

Wow it is a wonderful poem Onelia. Amazingly beautiful. 10+++ for it.

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Dear Onelia Avelar, continuing to read your poems I discover new values in your poems. The Eccentric is a sample of a little dream for the man-in-the-street, who knows how to travel, at no expense (responds to my poems: The small hero, and the driver of Bronx) . So well planned, well-penned a poem. I give it a 10. Thanks Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Rema Prasanna 05 July 2008

A special technical effect I find in this... well blended and really Onelia only you can do this so effectively.. Eccentric universally... great write and enjoyed. Rema

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Coach Roth 29 May 2008

St Thomas says the Kingdom of Heaven is Within...or maybe as close as someones chin...Coach

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 21 May 2008

Intersting imagery.........

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R H 16 May 2008

A superb portrait - the closing lines are pure magic creating such a sensual image. justine

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Original Unknown Girl 12 May 2008

This is divine, that last line is a belter! I absolutely love it. Says it all.... HG: -) xx

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David Desantis 29 April 2008

are you describing me in this one ;)

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Donall Dempsey 07 April 2008

Guess I am eccentric then...can only agree with the last line again and again and again and... love Donall Donall

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 April 2008

eclectically as sensous intensity when flows by the feeling eccentric as the ripples by the living organic, .....................still beautyful verse by the common feeling. well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Flora Gillingham 02 April 2008

Just read again. Lasting power. Effortlessly sensual. F

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Flora Gillingham 01 April 2008

Isn't 'curve' a sensual word? This is wonderfully composed, One. Love it. F

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