Thursday, June 16, 2016

Eating Out Comments

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When Deidre's chompers start to pound,
I cannot hear another sound.
and, as she downs a two pound steak
The Band itself begins to quake.
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Tom Billsborough
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Wes Vogler 10 November 2016

I must be aging.. I feel no desire to sort out Alexandrine and Limerick. In any event you have reached the objective of entertaining. ta

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Tom Billsborough 11 November 2016

Aging? Not you, Wes! Think it's a Limerick. I hope! thanks for the comment. It was your idea anyway!

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Bri Edwards 05 September 2016

speaking of P. Di and Eating Out................. within five minutes! ! ! was that intentional. me neither. well, maybe. bri :) Deirdre and the hound can split the steak. very nice little poem. bri ;)

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Tom Billsborough 06 September 2016

It was one of those Wes challenges. It's very fast eaters I can't abide, rather than noisy ones. There they are with a clean plate and looking smug as I attack my second potato! My son -in-law's one. No wonder he's overweight. Er, I didn't mean he's a potato, although he is Irish.

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