Monday, January 13, 2003

Eat Your Heart Out Comments

Rating: 3.3

I've come by, she says, to tell you
that this is it. I'm not kidding, it's
over. this is it.
I sit on the couch watching her arrange
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Charles Bukowski
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Bri Edwards 19 October 2024

Born in 1920, Bukowski's work is characterized by its raw, honest portrayal of , alcohol, and other vices, as well as its vivid depictions of the seedy side of urban life.

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Savita Tyagi 19 October 2024

A perfect narrative. Who wants what from this relationship is anybody's guess.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 10 October 2019

It's hard to describe this poem - dramatic? Kind of reminded me of Robert Browning's Porphyria's Lover - the famous dramatic monologue!

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2019

I want you to buy me some high-heeled shoes with tall thin spikes, black high-heeled shoes. no, I want them red... very fine poem. tony

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Uche Nwanze 10 October 2019

'I watch her walk down the cement walk under the trees She walks all right...' You killed it, your expressions leaves a lasting impression.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 October 2019

Nice poem. Enjoyed the finish. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 October 2019

I touch her wrists and hands feel up to her elbows no further. she gets up...// so loving expression

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2019

This poem has been selected for second time as the modern poem of the poem of the day. This is really a beautiful poem by Charles Bukowski.

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Dominic Windram 10 October 2019

Great poem from the guy who once said, ' Poetry is what happens when nothing else can.'. I guess he has a point!

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 10 October 2018

This poem is fun and amazing. Thank you for bringing such art into our lives. May your soul rest in peace

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Lyn Paul 10 October 2018

A beautiful expressive write. May you RIP Charles Bukowski

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 October 2018

I watch her walk down.... ...... Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 October 2018

Beautiful poem. An unexpected ending that a great poet can give. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2018

I watch her walk down the cement walk under the trees she walks all right and as the pointsettas drip in the sun I close the door.....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 October 2018

beautiful image- I sit on the couch watching her arrange her long red hair before my bedroom mirror. she pulls her hair up and piles it on top of her head- she lets her eyes look at my eyes-

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2018

Such a great poem by Charles Bukowski.......................

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P. Mason 01 December 2016

Who has endured these sorts of endings that never end can understand this poem. I like it!

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Marcy Jarvis 03 October 2005

I-want, I-want-Charles-In-Charge-of-me

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