Thursday, October 18, 2012

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So you think you know me
The mystery of my mind
The reason I confess so hesitantly
The equation of my kind
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 22 October 2012

I like the metaphor of the book...obviously because I'm a nerd haha. It's cleverly woven throughout the whole poem until a clear image comes to life at the end. Your metaphor is like seasoning in this poem. Sprinkled atop to compliment the whole meal without taking anything away. My favorite line is: And you think you know this After one late night conversation. So many people make that line sooo true.

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