Thursday, April 5, 2012

Eastwards Comments

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At the start of each day, turn your eyes eastwards
and you will see the sky slowly open up her heart
to reveal a mighty dazzling orb, shimmering in the
morning mist.
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Valerie Dohren
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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2018

Thank you for commenting Akhtar, very much appreciated.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

I turn my eyes eastwards at the dawn to look at the pleasant sun, I turn my eyes eastwards at noon to avoid the burning sun, I turn my eyes east wards at the dusk to look at the romantic twilight truly, throughout the night my eyes remain starring and waiting a lovely dawn.

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Mark Normand 17 August 2012

Yes one day very soon there will be beauty so great in that direction we won't be able to turn away. Great poem

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Karen Sinclair 22 June 2012

Gorgeous imagination, comforting words

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Donna Caldwell 12 April 2012

Beautiful poem Valerie! well spoken!

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Eric Cockrell 08 April 2012

absolutely beautiful way to start the day!

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Dave Walker 07 April 2012

A really beautiful poem, love it.

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Heather Wilson 06 April 2012

A lovely message to open our heart as nature does.

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Smoky Hoss 05 April 2012

A sincerely beautiful poem.

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