East Sakura (Ft Wabi Sabi) Comments

Drop (a sound) Another one falls Pristine pearl dives in a river East Sakura carry all this meaning thank you dear soul for this poem. very good poem well thought out. A miracle splash waves in circles Liquid mirror reflects the pink shadows chances in life for a new beginning,

East ever watches new rising sun and gets pleasure as well as reflection of mercy of God. A bless for every little thing, every new day brings and promise of spring we feel deeply with dew and breeze of tender wind. Snow melts and birds fly. A nice imagery smiles in this poem and soul gets grace of God. An excellent poem is well penned...10

For every little thing. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Oh, What a Wonderful job in describing both the Sakura And What You felt being there amongst such Beauty, Power and Inspiration! ! ! I Too Love the Sakura! ! ! Never been there in life but what the Sakura in Japan on utube with coffee morning anyhow! Beautiful write! ! ! Very Moving! ! ! What a Beautiful place the world could be if all felt like you! ! ! ! I do Believe we are Always learning in all we do! And Yes Meaning in all to all! Amazing write! ! ! Thank You for Sharing! ! !

In the morning light! Nice work.

Kudos are due both greatly gifted poetic collaborators. The lush and lovely imagery is so artfully expressed. A sublime melding!

Fabulous poem of beginnings and the pleasures of spring. Good dual write. The poems flow is spectacular and I felt like I was experiencing what you two were relating.

Ethical mythical story to contemplate....good paradigms of shift and hope....enjoyed the horizons that u created in this work

Great! Sakura taught many things of the fragile life?

Nice description............. Just one question: in the beginning you describe the spring in the east then you say: Each year, the same scenery repeats. Only different stories everyone makes But the lesson still same for us to pick so do you mean every time we learn new lessons? ? (in other words you mean by spring renewal of lives with new lessons.... etc? ?) I love your description especially the passage talking about rain, when reading this poem you kind of imagine all the scenery......... Nice poem i love it good luck with your co-writer Wabi Sabi (i like his poems too) Guess Who

Indeed a nice write and above all your belief for change is also nice. This poem is full of optimism. There, look over the skyline The birds announcing the return of 'Haru' The old trees stand in two lines along the river As if they watching over the new shine delight Radiated heat strikes on the frozen surfaces Slowly melting snow walking by windy hush Refreshing trees with spirit wash Flowing on the branches Dripping the warm tears Dropped...Fall down and leave There is good flow in your writing.. Great job my soul.

Seasonal changes are wonderfully brought out and I just remembered Shelly's The West wind while going through this poem! Great work :)

Very nice 'write'! ! This was written it seems, with a lot of optimism! Great job guys!

Very nice 'write' from you both! ! It seems this was written with a lot of optimism, as we all should have. Great job....10++

Hi my little soul, a beautiful poem from you and Wabi, we all must take chances in life. some will work some won't. But if we don't take the chance we will never know. A fantastic write from you both.