Monday, November 23, 2015

East Or West Home Is The Best Comments

Rating: 5.0

My friends say I have never written a poem on Pakistan!
I picked my pen several times to write a poem on her,
and to write a poem when I started looking at her,
tears came in my eyes and when I saw blood,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

If one realises their own mistake then probably they will not blame others and point fingers, a thought provoking poem indeed. No one can hurt you without your own consent similarly no one can play with your sentiments unless to allow them to do so, when elephant moves many dogs bark at him but elephant keeps moving. You nailed with this poem whoever it be and wherever he may be the best place is his home.........Great poem Janab.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

A vivid and real picture you have painted in this poem so orderly and nicely. Thank you dear Akhtar sir for posting such an intensive poem.......10

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Hazel Durham 24 November 2015

I love this superb write that is full of love for your home country even with troubled times you find peace in the comfort of that it is home!

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