Saturday, August 10, 2013

East Of Eden Comments

Rating: 5.0

We met
tasted grapes of wrath
gathered from the vine
yard
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Heather Burns
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Patricia Grantham 14 August 2013

How very romantic Heather. I can't think of a better place to have met but East of Eden. Adam and Eve shared this beautiful garden but it was just for a while. They were misled by the serpent thus they were banned from Eden then drank the grapes of wrath instead. An excellent write I must say.

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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2013

The east has always been symbolical of enlightenment and of finding oneself. Interesting and thought-provoking write.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 11 August 2013

short, simple but striking perfect imagery

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Valsa George 11 August 2013

This poem resonates with allusion to the beginning of creation when Eve shared the fruit of wrath with Adam! ! A great symbolic write! !

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Shahzia Batool 11 August 2013

a centralized metaphor! ! !

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Dave Walker 11 August 2013

A beautiful poem, love and life will always be bitter sweet.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 August 2013

After wine from grapes of wrath, the couple finding themselves east of Eden brings them to reality - maybe real love. Thank you.

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Neela Nath Das 10 August 2013

Picturesque it is! The word-picture is superb!

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