Earthly Things Fail To Describe You Comments

wow. brilliant. amazing. great job a++

very well wriitten and brillant i love it keep on writting and never give up

Words are just words some would say but yours twist and turn in such a melody that sways. Hypothesised, you become adorned. You become of the object that words can not describe. It is a exquisite poem from a very talented poet, full all the good stuff if only I could write such a happy poems as you do. I'm better with death, sadness, and anger. But of my poems I find this type the hardest write. The difficulty is how do I write when I feel content? You I think have conquered that.

So in my quest to find words to adorn You, I came up undone. Yes, you were born Of man, and may die a death like him too those were my favorite lines. the whole thing was beautiful and so mature. You might as well be a pro the way i see it :) good job

Amazing poem! I must recite this poem as a magical poem... You know the reason! Every line has its spirit and darting its arrow to one who read this poem in a way..... But I'll not say that here...I must say this's real poesy...I salute you..

For sure earhtly things what ever it can be beautifu, l but most of time we can't find the right words to express about we who love.Well done dear Lesie, i added you to my friends list, hope to hear from. Have a wonderful day. Hosny Soliman Egypt - Cairo

This poem is so....cute! :) really an excellent write, an amazing poem from an amazing poet. ;)

Agree with Abdallah. the transition, evolution of your delivered thoughts are exceptional and you can imagine your passionate writing while reading down the lines. great work indeed.

Nice description and likening to the one who u describe, , u are painting a pic. full of colors of imagination and lovely emotions, , love ur work u're talented the ink u've wrote this poem with, , never fades of his colorfulness, , sry I didn't find a rate more than 10 :)