Sunday, May 31, 2015

Earthbound Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Earth moves round the sun and has gravity,
It attracts things towards its related trinity.
To lead life there is water, air, sustenance,
Cold and hot is such here a life has tolerance.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2021

Sir, this is a value laden piece of poetry. Appreciated the spiritual undertone...5 stars

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Earth moves around sun and this is bound in a natural law. There is Force of Gravitation. We feel natural laws. Soul's theory is nice. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.

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Hazel Durham 09 July 2015

Nature is the beauty of this earth that we try to imitate and interpret in paintings, literature, dance and music we must live life to the full and enjoy! Beautiful write!

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Uma Ram 10 June 2015

Beautifully formulated poem sir. No one wants to die or give something to other, Persons with soul consciousness never do bother. Still they don’t like to leave the earth forever, They have earthbound life till death does cover. Very true sir and the truth is brought out artistically. Thanks for sharing sir.

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Valsa George 09 June 2015

Everything lives on Earth and hence we are all earth bound! Nobody likes to leave this Earth which is beautiful! As long as we are here, try to be in harmony with every living thing! Great message, sir!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 June 2015

An amazing and thoughtful poem. I agree with FGR, Mahakul is an intellectual..............10

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 June 2015

A Beautiful poem. Very true said, no one wants to die and leave this earth forever, as there are many things in earth to enjoy. Our nature is blessed with bountiful things. very few people understand the mind, body and soul, while others searching for God. Loved reading it.

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Kelly Kurt 31 May 2015

We come and leave with no physical possessions. Enjoy life when a part of it but do not think that you can take it with you. The soul doesn't require material things. I have little knowledge of Hindu gods or religion, but if this is part of its philosophy, I am part Hindu.: -) Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani. Peace

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A highly polished composition....Informational, intellectual and eye pleasing, incuding your erudite epilogue, and certainly not to forget to mention the evenflow structural movement f the work, throughout..Enjoyed! ~FjR~

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