Earth, Wind & Fire Comments

This is really good. I like the comparisons of love being something so natural and so powerful.10+

Successfully depicted sentiments.

Gives me a sort of nostalgic feeling. I love how I'm able to feel hopeful and hopeless at the same time when reading this. Its a universal depiction of love at its best and it's worst times. An amazing read thank you.

I remember too. Good thoughts and memories.

I like this one. Interesting imagery contrasting the sky and the ground. The 2nd and third stanza were very strong.

A well written poem! I really enjoyed reading it and even believe it can be some sort of inspiration..