Saturday, October 17, 2020

Earth To Sky Comments

Rating: 4.9

Flowers of stars are on the skyways
Dazzling on the moonlight's river,
You are in autumnal night
Weaving garland of love,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Britte Ninad 26 January 2021

nice to read this nonet; crafted well

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

nicely crafted the nonet......lovely style....God bless you

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2020

Flowers of stars are on the skyways Dazzling on the moonlight's river, You are in autumnal night Weaving garland of love, The holy earth lifting itself up into the world of the moon. symbolic.. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 21 October 2020

'Flowers of stars are on the skyways' - this opening line of the poem is a beauty in itself. In not so many lines a beautiful imagery has been drawn.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2020

A splendid poem so intricately designed. Flowers and stars for the poets from earth to sky.....So charming Mahtab! Top stars and more!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2020

cham chammma chammmm aaj badals have not come 'tis aaaaattuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnn

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2020

A poem to praise the muse of Autumn! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 October 2020

A charming piece of poetry from the heart of the poet.

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Susan Williams 18 October 2020

Love it! ! ! ! Love the word choice. Love the message. Love the shape. Top marks! ! !

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Varsha M 18 October 2020

Mystic marvelous magnificent poetic marvel woven meticulously on the celestial universe unearthing all that's special. Beautiful concrete poetry.thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2020

A procession of words and dreams. Nice format and good poem.5***

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Denis Mair 17 October 2020

The poet's mind is the zone where Earth and Heaven interpenetrate. He makes an offering to earthly love, and to everything that makes his love possible. I like your idea that the poem has its path to completion, so it becomes a vessel to store life. I like your word SKYWAYS.5 stars for great purport in small compass.

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