I am unreachable
floating amongst the stars
removed from all things mundane
- no soil on my hands
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Good morning Uuri, I admire your abilty to write in more than one language and I have enjoyed your awesome poetry. Thanks, Loyd
Woman is shining in her, at the end, found identity.
fine piece, , , , that stone of earth, , , the man climbing, , good imagery, , go on yuri
Powerful piece... no starry-eyes here, as your unexpected ending suggests... stellar work. t x
Very nice! ! Awesome imagery, especially floating in the stars. My only question is why bring a rock to you? I was thinking more like flowers, maybe chocolate. But I guess whatever floats your boat haha -david
Pragtig! en as daai man opdaag, kan jy dalk uitvind of hy 'n suster het! ;)
Lovely write Yuri I am absolutely certain they are al standing in line at this very moment, gemstone in the post 10 Chris
Bright and challenging words...the last two stanzas are the most i liked in this classy write...well-done, Yuri...10