Friday, April 16, 2010

Earth Status Comments

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(IT TOOK ME DAYS FOR ME TO FORMULATE THE TITLE)
(I HOPE BOTH TITLE AND CONTENT IS GOOD)

Earth used to be an immortal garden
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Obed dela Cruz
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Prashant Shaurya 19 June 2010

beautiful obed... i read it first.. then played 'earth song by MJ and read it alongside.. love prashant

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2010

Meaningful craft. Good.

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Yes more of us should be writing on this theme. I did a few also, one on 'Illegal logging' in Indonesia a few months back. More needed.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 23 May 2010

Love this poem very much... And Obed, I'm agree with the title, both the title and the content are very nice...

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Diane Violet 21 May 2010

Good powerful write Obed.

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Omar Ibrahim 21 May 2010

man is working for his personal benefit.nothing concerns him except money and pleasure.I liked the way you expressed that. thanks for sharing

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Supriya Prathapan 21 May 2010

Its high time we stop abusing 'Mother Earth' else she will let loose her fury in the form of natural disasters. Very well written.

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Ency Bearis 20 May 2010

Good advocate write about the nature, a fantastic concept.

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 19 May 2010

Excellent way to address the issues of our time. Good to know that you adore Nature.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 19 May 2010

So true! Your poem brings out the harsh reality!

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Christina Phan 19 May 2010

very true n we need to do something about it. its also sad n i dont tht happen to us.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 May 2010

The earth pollutions taking place are brought in the poem very nicely in sharp and powerful words.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 May 2010

An enviromental disaster!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 18 May 2010

Good write. As long as man's only desire is to obtain wealth and power by any means possible, mother earth may have to destroy all of her children [life] and begin a brand new cycle by getting rid of all present life and begin brand new (plant life, animal life...she should think twice about human life as we know it) I understand this is a vey bleak picture of the future, but my conclusion is my opinion based on past history and the present.Keep writing, poets must keep speaking.

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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