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Earth used to be an immortal garden
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Yes more of us should be writing on this theme. I did a few also, one on 'Illegal logging' in Indonesia a few months back. More needed.
Love this poem very much... And Obed, I'm agree with the title, both the title and the content are very nice...
man is working for his personal benefit.nothing concerns him except money and pleasure.I liked the way you expressed that. thanks for sharing
Its high time we stop abusing 'Mother Earth' else she will let loose her fury in the form of natural disasters. Very well written.
Excellent way to address the issues of our time. Good to know that you adore Nature.
very true n we need to do something about it. its also sad n i dont tht happen to us.
The earth pollutions taking place are brought in the poem very nicely in sharp and powerful words.
Good write. As long as man's only desire is to obtain wealth and power by any means possible, mother earth may have to destroy all of her children [life] and begin a brand new cycle by getting rid of all present life and begin brand new (plant life, animal life...she should think twice about human life as we know it) I understand this is a vey bleak picture of the future, but my conclusion is my opinion based on past history and the present.Keep writing, poets must keep speaking.
beautiful obed... i read it first.. then played 'earth song by MJ and read it alongside.. love prashant