Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Earth Music Comments

Rating: 4.8

A lone wolf howls
into the night.
Five wolves hear his cry
and venture across the dark ground.
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 12 August 2017

hi, daniel! i'm reading earlier postings of yours and read this one again. for another take on night sounds, you might check out my little poem, awake at 3 a.m. glen

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Glen Kappy 03 June 2017

I picked this poem because of its title, Daniel. I have many poems that speak to being attuned to the natural world- too many to try and think of or list. I'm convinced that to be separated from it lessens our health and sanity. For an opposite take on canine sound, do you know Billy Collins' poem with a title like Why I Don't Keep a Gun in the House? Glen

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Sophy Chen 09 December 2015

This poem just likes a film at begining and so vividly described and just like we are watching a short film now and it can be made into a short poetic drama i think. Sophy

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Simone Inez Harriman 05 November 2015

I have always pictured wolves with the word 'wilderness'. Your poem has the wilderness in the ink with the stamp of a wolfs print. Superb write.

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Liza Sudina 12 October 2015

LONG life to wolves! Protect them! remember Buddhist wisdom! My favorite polititian has a father's name Wolf and likes to imitate their howling! you are a musician if you count measures of all nature noises!

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 July 2015

and I'd like to add, in the book, part of your note/comment [*]: (In this poem of mine) I give expression to the presence of wilderness as a necessary element in our existence. My solitary human being is physically and spiritually connected to the wolves. That's his choice, that's his moral imperative. I admire him. That's why he shares this poem with the six wolves. (In questa mia poesia) voglio esprimere il senso della natura selvaggia quale elemento necessario alla nostra stessa esistenza. Quel solitario essere umano è fisicamente e spiritualmente congiunto ai lupi: è la sua scelta ed il suo imperativo morale. Da parte mia, lo ammiro. È per questa ragione che egli condivide questa poesia con i sei lupi. - - [*] Do you agree? - -

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 July 2015

''Earth Anthem'' + ''Earth Music'' for the Anthology ebook (with Italian translation) are ok?

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Fabrizio Frosini 22 July 2015

Musica della Terra Solitario, un lupo ulula nella notte. Cinque lupi odono il suo ululato e si avventurano per il terreno tenebroso. Il loro è un concerto di ululati alternati. Un uomo, in solitudine, li ascolta. Lui conosce la musica della terra. the whole text in the Anthology ebook.. ;)

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Galina Italyanskaya 26 November 2014

I love this poem. Reading this I remembered northern novels by Jack London. Another time.

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E Nigma 23 October 2014

Theirs is a concert of alternating howls, counting the measures of the animal noise, turning it into the concerto that makes all flesh on earth one spirit. When I read these lines all I thought of was that these wolves are the unknowing musicians and the man that listens is the conductor arranging the notes within his mind into a symphony of oneness. Earth music is a most appropriate title and this poem is a dark trancelike reminder to those that venture deep into the shadowy forest that wolves though beautiful in their arrangement are not creatures to be trifled with. A very nicely written piece.

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Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

Wolves wild and free in their own habitat, this poem is hauntingly beautiful with the essence of the wolves with their unique howling that sounds so primitive bringing back the past of our forebears who blended into this landscape with all it's hardships! !

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Sana Ghostana 02 May 2014

Once more I felt as if I was experiencing your poetry. not so much as a painting in a museum but more toward being in a cabin and hearing the wolves' howls in the forest with the man, quietly listening against a dim, moon lit landscape. I loved it!

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Noreen Carden 14 April 2014

Great description you can almost see the wolves with their heads raised howling and coming together to find strength in the pack.Beautifully written Daniel. Hopefully man will learn to appreciate all gods creatures and realize that animals only kill to eat unlike humans who kill for many other reasons.

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

Very descriptive and atmospheric - the title is truly inspired.

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Daniel Y. 09 April 2014

A lovely contemplation of nature, the wolves are a special imagery for the human consciousness, because they are simultaneously a symbol of society and barbarism. Your use of the word concerto makes me want to ask you to read my poem, Concerto. Though it has little to do with this poem.

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

.......enjoyed this one..............binds together creatures of this earth breathtaking imagery makes it even beautiful........ ..I cordially invite you to read my poem- '...to bosom thee....I'll rise''..and ''never look like one''..plzz share your views in comments.....regards

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Tanya Gupta 04 April 2014

very nice poem connected with creatures. come and read my poems and give me your views about them.

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Nika Mcguin 26 March 2014

This is beautiful! I'm envious, that you live so connected with such lovely creatures. I've heard that there are some red wolves in louisiana, but I've never come in contact with or even heard mentionings of wolves in my area. I would side with the Twin Cities on this. I've often thought about it myself, the fact that humans claim to own land. Yes we pay for the house and yard, but we don't really own the land. We still share it with neighboring animals(including insects unfortunately lol.) Being able to hear the howls of wolves at night, its something i could only fantasies about. Seems like something from a movie to me lol. Anyhow, great write as always, so much that I'm overcome with jealousy lol. So, I'll have to live vicariously through this poem. ~Nika

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 March 2014

the memory of wolves during my younger days still lingers with me..the last line means something very different..Thank you for sharing..

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2014

crisscross distances, I like it.

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