Monday, February 20, 2017

Earth Is Weary Comments

Rating: 5.0

The earth is alive like breath;
the air flows on a temperate wind.
The sea pulses like a beating heart,
like blood its currents stream.
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 23 February 2017

Beautiful write. Thought-provoking. A plea to save our lovely planet earth. You have given a great message without being didactic. A great work. A10.

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Barry Middleton 23 February 2017

Thanks Nosheen. I actually wrote this and another poem for Dr Fab's e-book but then I submitted Eden's Rose instead.

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Annette Aitken 20 February 2017

A lovely poem Barry, as we pass the baton onto our children and hope we have thought them well to respect our mother earth. Annette.

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Barry Middleton 20 February 2017

Thanks again Annette. It gives me a lot of joy to know that mt son gets it.

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