Friday, June 30, 2006

Earth And Men Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am earth
i see with
lenses in
the men
...
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john tiong chunghoo
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Raynette Eitel 30 June 2006

Another one of your cosmic poems, John...and well done. Raynette

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***** ********* 30 June 2006

Good One! does not sum up this poem up at all John, it is stunningly brilliant, read out loud especially, your line breaks build the tension perfectly and the Apocolytic outcome is intensely felt in it's ending. Excellent work, we should all go al Naturale ie stop shaving and rather start feeding and detoxing the body of our planet earth instead. Thank you so much for sharing your exquisite talent, Smiling at you, Tai

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Aashish Ameya 30 June 2006

very futuristic...good one

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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