i am earth
i see with
lenses in
the men
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Good One! does not sum up this poem up at all John, it is stunningly brilliant, read out loud especially, your line breaks build the tension perfectly and the Apocolytic outcome is intensely felt in it's ending. Excellent work, we should all go al Naturale ie stop shaving and rather start feeding and detoxing the body of our planet earth instead. Thank you so much for sharing your exquisite talent, Smiling at you, Tai
Another one of your cosmic poems, John...and well done. Raynette