Sunday, October 16, 2016

Earth And Heaven: Two Versions Comments

Rating: 3.8

His Version:

Head bowed, hands folded, you stand
at the edge of the only available Heaven.
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Daniel Brick
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Savita Tyagi 13 November 2016

Wonderful poem. We truly belong to earth and not heaven.....and the desire to ship to heaven together are such strong emotions and finding some harmony among it has been just as important. It is said in many eastern traditions that man and women guide each other at different times of life.

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Sekharan Pookkat 22 October 2016

heaven on earth is available and available heaven becomes hell when you search for heaven on earth with your thoughts of whims and fancies- thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 19 October 2016

Good concept... beautifully expressed...++++++++++10

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Liza Sudina 17 October 2016

1) A woman needs a man higher spiritually than she is. That is the law of spiritual nature and if you go against it - such a unit will fail. 2) you can't make smn to bow to Christ or any other faith, because God opens only HIMSELF directly to a person when a person is ready in his qualities. Any violence here is impossible and even simple talk is futile. I'm SURE of that. out of my experience and books, and even my communication with you. No result. But Gods works with them also loving them but out of being concealed. that's are two attitudes which I see in your poem. But the talk of comparison of two people who are deep in their faith already, and maybe different - that could be extremely interesting.

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Kim Barney 16 October 2016

The non-believer vs. the believer. We will always have both with us. Your poem makes people think, and that is a good thing.

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Daniel Brick 18 October 2016

WE WILL ALWAYS HAVE BOTH WITH US, That is such a fine insight into the dynamics of belief/nonbelief. This relates to the quality of life our stances gives us. Your thinking extends the poem past the limits in which I wrote, and that is a good thing! !

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