Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Earth A Fragmented Hard Disk Comments

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The bad clusters are increasing day by day,
Is the hard disk going to fail now?
In good faith I'm still waiting for someone to defrag it,
By now nobody came down for rescue of the clay!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

..........cause everywhere the makers of world constitutions are crating the labyrinth among innocent peoples as the good or bad nations, race, third or first world, superpower and at the same case the carriers of present religions beliefs; they are scheming from beyond religions veils as the rioters

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

Those who make antivirus program first spread the virus, ...... yeah; it's right but " The devils have developed viruses that it does not clean, " . I think this is not about the current world politics or current religions belief..........

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 September 2020

A wonderful and perceptive poem. We are at mercy of advance technology. So true, Earth, a fragmented hard disk. A brilliant poem by a great thinker.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2020

I don't want to drink the death in a number of sips....excellent sir! A wonderful composition!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 September 2020

An outstanding poem that is a reflection of the terrible pandemic period that we all are experiencing. " Develop a new program a new man and a new woman, Write a love story that doesn't have a tragic end, Make a disk that is not affected by the deadly viruses, " Wonderfully worded Akhtar Sahab! Lets pray that there is new dawn....Top Stars

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