Earth Comments

a very observant and cleverly written narrative poem about the conservation of the earth and the damage we do unwttingly to harm it every day. the personification of the earth potential thoughts and feeling used in this poem is fantastic. the drive behind the poem is very insightful. well versed and well written, my friend. absoutely a 10++++ Jen

YOU ARE A GOOD POET................ WITH GOOD IDEAS

this is an elegant piece on mother earth ur personification of mother earth makes it very hearttouching. i too have written a poem on mother earth, please read and comment it

Bhaswat If the Mother earth would hear the language we speak, see the activity on her lap i would tell her to sense the following lines first; Mother, do you cry for the modern man? You precocious yet short sighted child Developments of all sorts he would plan At any obstacle, he is riled Good art.10++

A great poem about our mother earth. Well said and a meaningful poem Enjoyed reading it 10+

earth..oh earth your ground is rich fertlized and cultivated for our needs..

A very fine poem about mother earth. I enjoyed the read. Lynn

The earth's autobiographry spelt out as it is the truth great poem realy telling man he better watch out++++10 regards

Great poetry. A genuine outcry of mother's soul. CP

...I shall say only...I love my boys MOTHER EARTH 10/10

oh..One of the best so far! points for beauty- 10/10 points for wisdom- 10/10 points for captivating text- 10/10 A lovely poem

Well written! Great rhyming pattern! Above all, concept, word coinage, progression... excellent. Thanks for the invitation Bhaswat.

This piece is well written. It comes out from the heart, love and dedication of mother earth is all there. This piece points out what man and beast have done to earth's environment and yet she (earth) remains quiet until her patience runs out and releases her fury and vengeance. A good one indeed.

Good work Bhaswat...very meaningful lines...thanks...10

This is excellent poetry and I love how you personify Mother Earth and ask her such pertinent questions. The last two lines give it a great unexpected bite of malice to add to the power of the poem. 10 love Karin

Brilliant exposé.It has to be said that man is his own worst enemy.He destroys his own future. You have only to think of nuclear power and it makes you think about the meaning of intelligence i.e intelligence used to self destroy.Climate change was never factored into massive industrial and technological development.

LOVELY POEM MAN! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

a very graphic poem about how man treats the land that has nutured and protected him, I give it a 10.

mother earth time n again does tell her storry...of her bliss as well fury. we r insensitive listeners, aren't we?

good theme/ the EARTH is so wise as her CREATOR. the Mother EARTH endures forever the wild deeds of her cruel children.