Shining as a lantern
Against the shimm`ring stars
Beautiful in splendour
With Venus and with Mars
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I echo the comments from the other poets. I did one on Earth but not in this way Val. Once again you produced a smashing poem, well done.
A fine description of our opal of antiquity. Lovely write. Have you read my poem 'There's an oasis in the dessert'?
What a beautiful description and creative poem you wrote about our Mother Earth! This is amazing, and hopefully, man will not tear it apart and wreck our gift as it surely seems to be. Love this poem. Excellent write..
Between Venus and Mars, how our beautiful Earth stays in space as the only haven (so far) for human beings, spinning round and round! Beautiful poem with the imagery, bright and vivid!
This earth so precious to us all, , many just don`t care enough about it, .nice poem Val
nice write, romantic ideal, isn't it a pity so many seem intent on destroying it.
I love how your mind's eye sees in explosive pictures the order of things, the presentation of ideas, etc. AND how you are able to find the perfect words to beautifully describe what you have seen within. Thank you.