Thursday, September 6, 2012

Earth Comments

Rating: 4.8

Shining as a lantern
Against the shimm`ring stars
Beautiful in splendour
With Venus and with Mars
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Valerie Dohren
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Thomas Hsi 28 September 2012

I love how your mind's eye sees in explosive pictures the order of things, the presentation of ideas, etc. AND how you are able to find the perfect words to beautifully describe what you have seen within. Thank you.

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Kevin Halls 18 September 2012

I echo the comments from the other poets. I did one on Earth but not in this way Val. Once again you produced a smashing poem, well done.

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Danny Draper 14 September 2012

A fine description of our opal of antiquity. Lovely write. Have you read my poem 'There's an oasis in the dessert'?

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Dee Corpolongo 10 September 2012

What a beautiful description and creative poem you wrote about our Mother Earth! This is amazing, and hopefully, man will not tear it apart and wreck our gift as it surely seems to be. Love this poem. Excellent write..

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Captain Cur 07 September 2012

Superb write, earth, where would we be without her.

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Smoky Hoss 07 September 2012

Very pretty poem; you are such a wonderful writer.

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Valsa George 06 September 2012

Between Venus and Mars, how our beautiful Earth stays in space as the only haven (so far) for human beings, spinning round and round! Beautiful poem with the imagery, bright and vivid!

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Dave Walker 06 September 2012

A fantastic poem, one day we may realise what we have.

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Heather Wilson 06 September 2012

This earth so precious to us all, , many just don`t care enough about it, .nice poem Val

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Mark Dillon 06 September 2012

nice write, romantic ideal, isn't it a pity so many seem intent on destroying it.

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