On one fateful evening
Of our calmly fading lives
Gripped by unknown despair
With tears you proclaimed
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Hey seema you are a sweet heart amazing.......how do you get ideas....for the poems..i just loved it...
Oh seema! what a poem! ! ! weightful composition! Lovely! ! 10++++
like rk --I too will say the same that your poem is to be read and read and read and read a 100 times A+ and 10+ love anju
the poem of you is good as sugar is sweet. revolutionery spirit in love and passion is shown with poerful words.
here is a poem which can be read and appreciated over and over again..
realms of deep thinking opened through these profound lines! truth well depicted!
hm....... its good dede. really life in earth is like this
Death is something that only He could deem...a 10 from me Seema.
This earth along with us is dying out slowly, Seema...for want of kindness compassion love and good will...on account of wounds inflicted by we earthlings... good write, thematic...good use of allegory...10