Earth Comments

We should our earth.A good message.

Let's save the earth, a good message.

Your poem is both passionate and lyrical. In your commitment to alerting people to the peril Earth faces you don't forget to highlight the wonders that make her worth saving. It's the fourth stanza that lists what we will lose which contains inside it A Portrait of Beauty - I'll spell out the poem within your poem: Nature sings, Flowers spread sweet aromas, people rejoice in the many colors of Life: We have saved our home! I added the last line because I'm sure you agree we must have HOPE and see Earth

As first Two Lines themselves catches me so much Our planet name 'Earth', Which is valuable as worth. A worthy Poem of Nature's Awareness! ! Nice line and expression! -! Wish I am born not as a Human but a Root of this Trees! - Siddartha Montik!