Saturday, August 22, 2009

Early Works -Years Comments

Rating: 5.0

Children playing with their toys
dotted around the floor
peer at you with questioning eyes
as if you are a stranger in their lair.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 August 2009

True as True can be, David....Eloquent delivery....Their never seems to be enough time...and then suddenly, thy're not kids anymore. So, one evening you're sitting in your wingback, gazing at a photograph from perhaps '69, and you begin to wonder as to what you could have done different, to have done more, to have made it more fun, for them, for you...for everyone. And then you realise that you could not have done it much, if any differently, at all... for if you had, they would not have had all that they did! And bottom line...it's never enough time...Stellar Write! FjR

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