Saturday, August 16, 2008

Early Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rest easy my darling
Though first snows are falling
They’re early this year, yes I know
Come back to your pillow
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Christine Natale
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Not a member No 3 28 August 2008

Very finely crafted lyricism Christine... generates loving warmth against the cold innocence of snow.. x jim (m/c!)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 August 2008

..amazing composition! ........10

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Emilie DeVere 24 August 2008

It's a lovely poem. You have captured the meaning of love in a few verses.

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Joseph Poewhit 16 August 2008

Poem puts a lot of wood on the old fire of love.

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Christine Natale

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