Early Morning Walk... Comments

This is sadly ironic. You soak in the spring and indeed nature in spite of your recent loss. Great stuff.

This is truly beautiful Patricia, the imagry is fantastic and the word usage is fabulous, an excellent read indeed. Thankyou Patricia--Melvina--

I here you! It snowed in Texas...On the &th of April...now that is a cold beginning to spring, and the flowers had already started to bloom...loved this. Sheer delight your words! Best wishes, Theo

What a lovely poem! Wonderful....Loved it.

a picture perfect poem. made me feel i was outside and needed my coat, could smell the fresh air, great piece.

Nice peice of work, Has a gentle softness about it.

Patricia, this is such a lovely write. You totally brought to life that walk, love how you brought the whole landscape to my desk, just lovely. HG: -) xx

A blinder in the last line of each of these stanzas. As David says, haunting... deeply atmospheric. Grand work. t x

I really get that chilling slightly haunting feeling that comes with a dark early morning wind. Very Evocative, thank you Patricia. Love from David.